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Today I completed my other work and the teacher before hand told us what to do. It was a journal entry about an important part of Bernadette's life. But there is one rule, we had to pretend to be Bernadette. For this I choose Bernadette's first vision of Mary at the grotto. I went into detail... a bit, ok nothing much happened but this is what I wrote.
Here is all the links that I linked in the last post because those are the same place I learnt this
do you think I should improve it? if so what should I improve?
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